Charlotte's Works

The detail of the hair looks great Charlotte, I keep looking at it thinking it would look better with a light source to the upper left, that way you can bump up the lighting on the left side of her face and down her bosom to show more realism and her hair could have rim lighting behind it, just an idea. The expression on her face is perfect, she literally looks like shes looking down at the viewer with her nose in the air.

I think it may benefit from some up lighting, personally. Her expression is perfect, as his her hair, but I think some uplight might sell the story that she is a schemer a bit better. Just a thought.

Also, her breasts look hard and angular at the moment. I can't help thinking that they could be softened and made just a little fuller.

Wow this look awesome! I do think she could use slightly darker shadows on the neck (her left). Awesome rendering of the hair!

How about raising the skirt a little bit and having a thinner, chiffon sort of fabric that you can see her feet through? That way you will sell the idea of multi-fabric luxury!

I like the ribbon on the bottom of the dress the best. The layered look with the transparent fabric might be nice as well but she would then have to have shoes or sandals...something else to design.
The fabric folds of the sleeves are in the right place but I think there needs to be a...what's it called...the darker 'line' between the lighted side and the fill light. It was just in the traditional art section of IFX...for the figure, I just can't find it right now. Darkening that dividing area in the face as well with a saturated dark orange/red would make the lit side of the face appear brighter. Do it with a soft brush.
The right side of her hair..her left needs to be darker to show that it curves away from the light. Right now it looks a bit flat and all on the same plane. Hope that helps.

I can definitely relate to your frustration Charlotte, this happens to me all the time.

Tbh I started doing a paint over (I didn't save it tho..sorry), and noticed if you darken the part of the pillar closest to Cersai, it will make her light skin tone pop out even more and you could add more highlights to the left part of her face to push it more. Also noticed her bosom seems a bit flat color wise, it doesn't quite match the quality of lighting as her neck and face. a bit more lighting on the left would really bring out that area also and make it more shapely.

Other then those suggestions, I think it's looking great !