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22 Nov 2020 18:23 #32370 by Charlotte
Replied by Charlotte on topic The Aywas Thread
Thanks :)
People might of course choose to mix and match with completely different things, but I'm glad it works as a set, anyway :)

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12 Jan 2021 14:22 #33126 by Charlotte
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Did a new (or rather reworked an old, unused) set for the aywas avatars... But but but... I want to be done (though I still need to colour the lines and make item icons) but I'm not sure... For one thing that cloak is utterly boring (behind). And for another the quiver with arrows is magically floating behind her back and she's got the extra thing on her belt that I guess I can leave just for looks, but maybe that's where the quiver ought to be. Though reworking those bits might mean the items can't be "layered" properly on site. (Items are hair, face, top, bottom - i.e. trousers, boots, belts etc, bow & arrows, and cloak. Both bow and cloak have layers both above and below the avatar, which is what makes things a bit tricky...


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12 Jan 2021 18:37 - 12 Jan 2021 18:37 #33133 by Valence
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I think it looks fine. The quiver doesn't appear to float to me, it just reads as being behind the cloak and adding another strap could make it look a little too busy at the smaller resolution. :shrug:
One thing I might consider changing is the simple red/black stripe on the trousers near the hip. It seems a little too modern and doesn't quite fit with the ornate designs elsewhere.
Love the work on the bow and arrow though. :thumbup:

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12 Jan 2021 19:25 #33134 by Charlotte
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Thanks. But with regards the the floating quiver, it has to look OK with other clothing items. So I did add a strap after all, and redid the cloak (the part behind the avatar). The black lines will be coloured, and I think I'll keep the coloured stripe near the hip just to tie the trousers together colouring wise with the top. But thanks anyway :P

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