Charlotte's Works

Nice idea on the writing. It definitely enhances it. ... Maybe add some shadows behind the spruce to set it in place, showing the relation to the wall. (Though I'm looking at it from work, so it's hard to tell if you already did this)

It is remarkable how well red and green go together. Over a dark background too it would make a lovely, cosy scene!

I was going to suggest holly too, but didn't know if that would over-crowd the vegetation portion. But that would allow for the red berries you mention. That, or maybe add a red ribbon or similar item to the bottom area? Table clothe or place mat, etc.

I was going to suggest red berries, like cranberries would really compliment the green leaves in the foreground and the background should be gold with some more candles to make it seem like its sparkling.

The more I look at this picture the more I like it as all the details slowly reveal themselves. But on first glance there is one area that initially seems confusing to the eye (well, my eye at least)




The background and foreground elements are quite close in hue and value and although losing edges in shadows is always a good idea losing them in midtones can create a bit of spatial ambiguity especially as it coincides with the underside of that circular bit at the top of the candle holder. If you're going to add more elements then one here might work or instead just darken the area at the back to make the candle move forward.

And forgive me for scrawling clumsily over your lovely detailed work.