June challenge here: The Leprechaun
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CGAN Jan 2015 Challenge - White as Snow - WIPs
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What's the app you are using?
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Mindbender, I think you should start adding color to yours, mountains different color to separate from the structure and trees to the right also make the trees path in the forground darker and background like trees and mountains a bit lighter.
Here's where I am with mine, trying to make everything solid looking and flipped it horizontally liked the look better, its still just rough but I think i'm going in a good direction.
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Dom: Nice idea you've got going there, mashups of contrasting characters are always good fun. As micro suggested it'd be good to separate some of the icemen a little, either through tweaking values or adding an icy mist between them. There's a lot of complexity in all those poses and although they all look great when I click on the picture and view the detail it is quite hard to read the image as a thumbnail. Keep zooming out now and again while you're painting and it should help you to keep control of all the silhouettes. (Aside: my autopredict keyboard wants to change icemen to cement?! Glad I spotted that otherwise my comment would have been surreal gibberish.)
Mindbender: Lovely cold colours there and a nice composition to lead your eye into the image. I also like the way the forms all have the suggestion of a kind of crystalline shape, emphasizing the solid, icy mood.
Schizo: Great figure work, as always. Accurate pose and anatomy and a nice sinister design. There's a slight asymmetry to the face but I know from previous challenges that you'll make it work just fine.
Microscopi: Epic and ominous. There are some great imposing designs in your composition and I look forward to seeing you shape them with detail. The shadows dominate the image at the moment which contrasts with the "White" theme of the challenge so perhaps a softer midtone transition might add to the mood.
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I have given Elsa a go. Pushing her back is a good idea, so thanks Mic!
Here's the update.
Oh, and Btw, I really like the solitude and isolation in yours Mic. Keep it up. It has good storytelling tension in it.
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Thanks for feedback. I use an ipad for this one, drawing in ArtRage using a stylus. Here's another WIP, added birds for scale, switched placement of some values and added Hints of red for focus and effect.
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I really like the texture too. Good work so far!
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Dom Elsa is looking really good, the army guys look great too, although if you made the canvas taller and moved Elsa up and the army down a bit then would put some distance between them and show more scale, also the different guys should be smaller the further back they are. Looking good keep it up!
Schizo, looking forward to your next update!! Thanks for comments on mine, Valence I hope when I put some color down it looks more snowy, with icy rocks etc..
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Great idea, like the first sketch you have going, he has that crazy look in his eye
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