Charlotte's Finished

Agree with Val, and also like the ornament image.

Great work here, hope to see more works from you soon!

Look what I found! *referring to thread*

 
 

Edit: and as usual... the "creases" on the fish tail could certainly have been made softer... 

These look fantastic when shown together. The shading and definition are so clean and consistent across both images and the result is very satisfying.

Thank you
Though I kind of think showing them together makes the second one look a bit drab as the first one is much more colourful :p

After several adjustments but not yet any checking on other devices such as my cell phone, I think maybe my website is finally updated...

www.charlotteahlgren.com/

Let me know if you think images are too big or small or text is unreadable or misspelled or if there's anything else looking off or not working. I've made some changes after feedback from Banj, so, hopefully it's not crazy bad...

Oh and I really need to make at least a couple more finished pieces that aren't fan art this year...

Edit: I have now checked on my phone and I need to make it responsive I guess, but once I shrink each page they look fine... to me...

Charlotte wrote:

After several adjustments but not yet any checking on other devices such as my cell phone,

Right click in the browser and select inspect or inspect element (depends on browser) in the tool bar of the palette that opens is an option to view as various devices to check responsiveness/different screen sizes (the icon is usually a couple of overlapping rectangles). 

I had forgotten about that, thanks. Though I did edit my post too

When I view it on my tablet the site is larger than the screen so I have to pinch/zoom out to see everything.
Also (after zooming out to the full view) the "column" of art and text is aligned with the right margin whereas when I view it on my PC all the art and text is aligned centrally.

And as I know nothing about website design I don't know if this is a good or bad thing or if it's deliberate or unintentional.
Just thought I'd mention the difference.

Yep, at the moment it's a fixed size and needs scrolling horizontally to see the page content. I noticed a typo on the about page where you are missing a d in address.   crabsnake. Although they are capitalised for emphasis, the text links on the socials aren't immediately obvious as links (maybe add a colour to them).

And that dragon thingy in the Mucha style pic is still pretty cool (oh wow that's so great).