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Also, her breasts look hard and angular at the moment. I can't help thinking that they could be softened and made just a little fuller.
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With regards to lighting, I did have the left light source from a different direction initially which gave a sort of rim light to the hair. Dave said it made her look like a cut-out and I agreed, so I moved the light. Personally I'm happy the way the light is now
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The fabric folds of the sleeves are in the right place but I think there needs to be a...what's it called...the darker 'line' between the lighted side and the fill light. It was just in the traditional art section of IFX...for the figure, I just can't find it right now. Darkening that dividing area in the face as well with a saturated dark orange/red would make the lit side of the face appear brighter. Do it with a soft brush.
The right side of her hair..her left needs to be darker to show that it curves away from the light. Right now it looks a bit flat and all on the same plane. Hope that helps.
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When it comes to the dress, I do not intend to shorten it for the one simple reason that it already has a high waist and the long skirt is (in my opinion) necessary to balance that out. If I shorten the skirt it will look like she's just wearing a dress that's too small for her or hitched too high... (Also I really wouldn't want to repaint something like the dress folds which I found terribly difficult to get "right" in the first place, but I know one sometimes has to repaint things and the dress design IS my reason. I promise!)
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Seems every fix I've tried since the last wip just ends up messy or muddy. I've changed her face a bit and it almost gave her a black eye... The shading of her shoulder looks awful and the ring on her hand is just wrong. I tried adding a gradient instead of ribbons to the hem of her skirt but that just ended up looking like dirt. Grrr.
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Tbh I started doing a paint over (I didn't save it tho..sorry), and noticed if you darken the part of the pillar closest to Cersai, it will make her light skin tone pop out even more and you could add more highlights to the left part of her face to push it more. Also noticed her bosom seems a bit flat color wise, it doesn't quite match the quality of lighting as her neck and face. a bit more lighting on the left would really bring out that area also and make it more shapely.
Other then those suggestions, I think it's looking great !
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