CGAN July 2014 Challenge - The Big Ad Job - WIPs

Improvements? On suggestion from the mother I've moved the text below the characters and enlarged them to compensate. I've also played around with the colour and done a few other tweaks and additions.

Wow looking great Claude ! It looks amazing, awesome job !

Agree Claude, that looks pretty awesome.

What a wise mother you have Claude
If anything, I think you could bring the right foreground character forwards a bit more, contrast wise. Right now it's only the knight's armour that's really clear all other characters share the "midground brown". Also since they seem to be more sci-fi on that side, that could be emphasised on the same foreground character... Perhaps something glowy in his costume, or just somewhat clearer detail. That's what I'm thinking anyway

I think that's not done yet, am I right?

WIP 3
Added some more detail.

That's looking great, Mute. He's a biggin!

I love the way we've seen this guy appear out of the darkness! I can almost hear the clomp of his boots and the jangle of his armour as he strides towards us.
Awesome Mute!

Under all that armor and clothes he is just a shriveled up stick figure of a man.

Like an American footballer! :p