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If you know of any way to improve any piece or technique, I´d love to hear it!.
Thank you so much for taking the time to look at this ^^
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The lowermost piece has some lighting issues in my opinion. I guess the dark parts of the suit are supposed to be shiny and the green top layer matte, but you have light reflected on the inside of her arm where it would be shadowed - I would have placed the highlights on the edge of the green armour instead. (The shadows don't really match the direction of the light judging by the highlights either.) Overall I think you could push your values quite a bit, both light and dark
Any an all misspellings are henceforth blamed on the cats.
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Thank you very much for the feedback
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Charlotte wrote: ... even if it doesn't make me think of lions. More a werewolf - gorilla or baboon cross.
That's what I was thinking!
The fur on it is awesome. Very impressed by that. The second piece is similar in your use of texture. Great stuff!
The last one has some weird anatomical issues. She has the body of a pre-teen and yet has breasts and hips. Weird!
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Charlotte wrote: ... even if it doesn't make me think of lions. More a werewolf - gorilla or baboon cross.
Yeah, I get what you are saying guys. I think I should have exagerated more the teeth while also pulling a bit up the smile or perhaps the whole muzzle to enhance the feeling. I think I failed there but I´ll definetly perform better next time

Domtopia wrote: The last one has some weird anatomical issues. She has the body of a pre-teen and yet has breasts and hips. Weird!
Thanks for the compliments Dom ^^. I see your point, when designed it was intended to be a slim race with four arms, I´ll paste a spoiler here so you can check. But I believe you are right, the hips are too big even for an alien sort of race and perhaps her head is big compared to the body. I´ll fix it soon!
Thank you again guys

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The concept looks good too. The lower arms are very Tyranid. Good idea!
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For the third piece I'd work on stronger lighting, unless the character is standing in a diffused lighting/overcast day. The values look rather flat and too similar. Don't forget occlusion shadows for any small crevices as well. Hope this helps!
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