Crankshaft's Sketchbook

That's a crazy amount of detail!
I congratulate you on your immense amount of patience.

Thanks val. Does this update read better as a starport/environment? People were saying it looked like a ship but it is a building as part of a larger environment

I can see how people would read it as a ship, mainly due to the overall shape at the largest scale. The swept-back "wings" give it a pointy feel that may seem reminiscent of those big star destroyers from Star Wars.

If you wanted to move away from that and emphasize it as a building then you could try to break that sleek outline/silhouette and maybe have a large tower at the left end or perhaps break the symmetry across that diagonal line.

Thanks Val, I applied some advice do these read as starports/as a building part part of an environment? The goal was to focus on the building but make it clearer it is part of something bigger. I'm going to include color thumbnails to help reinforce the starport environment do they help make it clearer now? I'm trying to include this piece in my portfolio.