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17 Nov 2017 14:21 #19233 by Charlotte

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Looks good to me. In the Techni piece I think I'd simplify the hand to the left and leave those small white marks out. They don't quite look as "clean" as the rest of the work, being so small. Otherwise you seem to have it all figured out already

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17 Nov 2017 21:59 #19235 by Valence

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It's the hand on the right that looks slightly off to me in that pic. It's very well drawn (and as someone who can't do hands well, I'm envious!) but its postition doesn't quite match the angle of the forearm.

The picture before that is amazing. That shading of parallel linear strokes is surprisingly subtle and effective.

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19 Nov 2017 01:52 #19242 by Mr. Sabrosito

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yeah you´re both right and the foreshortening in one hand is a little fucked up.
i don't really like the robot much, doing stylized stuff its difficult . Small stuff can easily make the image not appealing at all.

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19 Nov 2017 01:54 #19243 by Mr. Sabrosito

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More tomato and chili BBQ sauce bros

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19 Nov 2017 02:22 #19244 by Mr. Sabrosito

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Rudolph you just fucked up .

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19 Nov 2017 11:38 #19246 by Charlotte

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uhm, is it just me or is the trouser part of Mr Chili there looking a tad bit "inappropriate"? :dry:

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19 Nov 2017 14:01 #19247 by Mr. Sabrosito

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Charlotte wrote: uhm, is it just me or is the trouser part of Mr Chili there looking a tad bit "inappropriate"?

he has some permanent pelvic thrush going on

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23 Nov 2017 00:43 #19281 by Mr. Sabrosito

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Children book style sketch

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24 Nov 2017 01:35 #19293 by Valence

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I find it really tough to try and contrive styles like this, but you're really nailing the children's illustration look here. Not only in the style and expressions but also the composition with all of that busy detail to keep a young viewer's eye interested in what's going on.

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