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Attos' Sketchbook and Studies NSFW Nudity
20 Jan 2019 00:57 #23469
by Atto
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Wow it's been a long time since I've posted on this thread!
I'm joining in a Draw It In Your Style thing on Instagram to try and motivate myself - 1 dodgy piece of art a month is going to get me nowhere.
So heres my interpretation (still a WIP) of Joanacchis piece.
Its more of a complete reinvention than a copy in my own style but there you go.
Goldfish and a LOT more hair still to add. I think something is off with it but Ive stared too long at it to see straight anymore and I dont mean the dodgy shading on the claw like hand (though feel free to pull me up on that please)
I'm joining in a Draw It In Your Style thing on Instagram to try and motivate myself - 1 dodgy piece of art a month is going to get me nowhere.
So heres my interpretation (still a WIP) of Joanacchis piece.
Its more of a complete reinvention than a copy in my own style but there you go.
Goldfish and a LOT more hair still to add. I think something is off with it but Ive stared too long at it to see straight anymore and I dont mean the dodgy shading on the claw like hand (though feel free to pull me up on that please)
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20 Jan 2019 09:46 #23471
by Charlotte
Any an all misspellings are henceforth blamed on the cats.
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Might have to look that thing up on Insta 
For the hand, I think the two outstretched fingers look too long because the others are comparatively placed too low on her hand. And maybe it's the lack of a hairline that makes things look off for now? hmm and maybe a bit of the shading/form of the eye to our right...
But it's a good wip and interesting to see how different it is from the original.
For the hand, I think the two outstretched fingers look too long because the others are comparatively placed too low on her hand. And maybe it's the lack of a hairline that makes things look off for now? hmm and maybe a bit of the shading/form of the eye to our right...
But it's a good wip and interesting to see how different it is from the original. Any an all misspellings are henceforth blamed on the cats.
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20 Jan 2019 18:38 #23479
by Atto
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Aaaaaand think I may be done.
Im not gonna post it on Insta just yet but could you lovely people give me any more feed back pls.
I have this horrible habit of posting and then going - meh it's just not finished to a high enough standard - conversely I dont want to spend ages on it, I'm getting itchy to move on to something else.
Im not gonna post it on Insta just yet but could you lovely people give me any more feed back pls.
I have this horrible habit of posting and then going - meh it's just not finished to a high enough standard - conversely I dont want to spend ages on it, I'm getting itchy to move on to something else.
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20 Jan 2019 19:14 #23482
by Charlotte
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Posting is a great way of seeing all ones mistakes...
I took the liberty of doodling a bit on top, though I am aware that it's a bit of "my style" rather than "your style" which rather counteracts the point of the piece...
First, I still think the hairline looks wrong, making it seem like the hair floats a bit above her... (like seaweed - maybe it is!) And also I think you managed the round little bellies of goldfish wonderfully on all but one fish. These two things I squigglied in purple. (With a cat on my tablet)
Second, I just played around with a bit more colour - a bit more saturated red along the deepest shadows, and a bit of blue in the left lower corner. Oh and I colored her eyes. Though perhaps lime green wasn't the best choice
And third, I also fussed around with an airbrush softening the paint in some areas. I know you paint with more contrasts and edges than I do between colours, but especially on the neck, I feel that unless she was meant to have gills, the creases were perhaps a bit too pronounced?
Anyway, apart from the purple squiggles it's all playing around on my part.
I took the liberty of doodling a bit on top, though I am aware that it's a bit of "my style" rather than "your style" which rather counteracts the point of the piece...
First, I still think the hairline looks wrong, making it seem like the hair floats a bit above her... (like seaweed - maybe it is!) And also I think you managed the round little bellies of goldfish wonderfully on all but one fish. These two things I squigglied in purple. (With a cat on my tablet)
Second, I just played around with a bit more colour - a bit more saturated red along the deepest shadows, and a bit of blue in the left lower corner. Oh and I colored her eyes. Though perhaps lime green wasn't the best choice
And third, I also fussed around with an airbrush softening the paint in some areas. I know you paint with more contrasts and edges than I do between colours, but especially on the neck, I feel that unless she was meant to have gills, the creases were perhaps a bit too pronounced?
Anyway, apart from the purple squiggles it's all playing around on my part.
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21 Jan 2019 18:36 #23498
by Atto
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So I’ve tried to incorporate some of your advice Charlotte. I agree that edges are normally more visible in my art than yours so while I’ve softened some areas I didn’t want to go the whole hog. I tried changing the eye colour too but wasn’t happy with the results.
So here’s the final that you can see gracing the pages of insta and FB.
So here’s the final that you can see gracing the pages of insta and FB.
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21 Jan 2019 18:45 #23499
by Charlotte
(but you forgot to chubbify that one fishy)
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(but you forgot to chubbify that one fishy)
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