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12 Jul 2014 16:23 - 01 Jan 2016 17:07 #2301 by cgmythology
I decided to start up a sketchbook thread with my current WIP, sketches, speedpaints, etc. I just began on a personal piece, a painting of Aphrodite and finished the sketch, here it is:

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12 Jul 2014 16:26 #2304 by Domtopia
I love her eyes CG. This is going to be a good one to watch!

Great start!!

Everything's on the right!!!

It's like driving abroad!

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12 Jul 2014 16:41 #2310 by Digital Dave
Fantastic sketch and layout, George. Look forward to seeing it progress. ... No crit, just noticed the little guy on the left can really jump! ;) He' getting more air than the dolphin. :)

I get sketchy around pencils! ...=D
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12 Jul 2014 16:55 #2316 by Stuart
Wow, nice. Looking forward to seeing it come to life.
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12 Jul 2014 18:43 #2348 by cgmythology
Digital Dave: Thanks, and that little guy has air! :D

Stuart: Thanks!
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Worked on the image nonstop since the last update, here is the current progress:

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Feedback appreciated as always!

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12 Jul 2014 18:50 #2353 by Stuart
Looks good, but keep an eye on your saturation, the pic is WAY too colourful at the moment I think.

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12 Jul 2014 20:35 #2369 by ClaudeCrow
Either those lilly pads get increasingly massive as they get further away or that's a really small dolphin. At the moment your ground plane doesn't seem to line up with everything else in the image. It seems to be way too steep based on the lillypads.

I'd also say that her breasts are bit too different in size, then again I'd of thought Stuart would have pointed that out if it were so noticeable.. I think that's one of his focus areas anyways.. :)

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13 Jul 2014 03:22 #2416 by cgmythology
Stuart: Thanks, I decreased the saturation a bit (especially on the background).

ClaudeCrow: The perspective is a bit messy on the lillipads, I refined it a bit further, hope it's OK now. Altered the breasts a bit as well, thank you!

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13 Jul 2014 03:43 #2417 by Digital Dave
Man, that looks fantastic. Lovely face and hair. Excellent work.

I get sketchy around pencils! ...=D
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13 Jul 2014 03:58 #2421 by evilrobot
Looks fantastic;)
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