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14 Mar 2023 13:12 #44842 by Charlotte

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15 Mar 2023 18:54 - 15 Mar 2023 18:56 #44855 by Valence
 

Still not sure about a lot of things here. The snakey head looks better but turning it into a twisting "outline" of magicky stuff seems to take away from the idea of it constricting around the neck.
EDIT: In fact it now just looks like a bendy green ladder.
Also that staff and the hand/arm that holds it all make that pose look very static.
But... :shrug:
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15 Mar 2023 19:16 #44856 by Banj
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Maybe adding some transparent body or glow to the snake will make it more magical. Magic green snakes just makes me think of this:
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15 Mar 2023 19:26 #44857 by Valence
"When slithering horror threatens..."

BOOOINK!! :lol:
Now that's a superior sound effect. :aha:

And yes, I will be adding glow to all the magic at the end when I finally work out what I want it to look like. :)

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15 Mar 2023 19:29 #44858 by Banj
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Another thing I might do is add some green to the casters staff in order to connect the two things together (BOOOINK!) 

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15 Mar 2023 19:51 #44859 by Charlotte
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I had no idea Doc Savage existed as anything but dorky books. And the TV series is just as dorky! :cheer:

Also, for the guy with the staff I think the pose looks stiff because he holds both arms the exact same way? If he's using his staff to cast a spell forward, maybe the other arm should pull backwards a bit? *

*Disclaimer: I don't actually know how to cast magic :dry:

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15 Mar 2023 20:18 #44860 by Banj
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:blink:
I had no idea Doc Savage existed as anything but dorky books. And the TV series is just as dorky! :cheer:


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15 Mar 2023 20:24 #44861 by Charlotte
I'm sorry, do you find it the height of art and literature? :dry:

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15 Mar 2023 20:28 #44864 by Banj
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I think I have maybe read one Doc Savage book   But I do quite enjoy the film 

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15 Mar 2023 20:30 #44865 by Charlotte
I have read one or two... Never saw the film (not a series then? There seemed to be so many things mentioned for him to fight, but I guess I shouldn't be surprissed.) And I can imagine it being enjoyable.... I just can't imagine it being very good... :shrug:

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